What is your message or hook that will stop people in their tracks?   Does this one I put on a bus work? Do you have one that you can tell people in just 20 seconds or less.

Ours goes something like this.  “Would you like to be shown how to make more money in your business and use techniques that have been proven to make more profit and if they don’t it won’t cost you a single dime?”

Now of course that is a mini-pitch but what can you say about your business that has some type of guarantee attached to a specific result?  What risk reversal are you willing to offer?

I will post more on this later and if you need help with your, use the contact page above and I will look over some of them and post my humble opinion on them.